tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post2226595497389285633..comments2023-08-19T01:55:15.053-07:00Comments on God’s Piñata: Mag 57: 'Violets'Steven Cainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00251773690801692907noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-11917637450599887412011-04-09T05:52:03.419-07:002011-04-09T05:52:03.419-07:00What a sentimental short story. You paint pictures...What a sentimental short story. You paint pictures with the most intense colors. I loved it.Maria Papadopoulouhttps://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/wintergirlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-87021592652251309492011-03-21T07:53:59.215-07:002011-03-21T07:53:59.215-07:00Chiffon is such a nostalgic word. Beautiful write,...Chiffon is such a nostalgic word. Beautiful write, Seven.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-5216960821427578332011-03-20T07:28:18.590-07:002011-03-20T07:28:18.590-07:00Sad, yes, but so beautiful. You have taken the in...Sad, yes, but so beautiful. You have taken the innocent expectations of all new brides and traveled them down the road of life until reality emerges and the cycle begins again. Brilliant!CHummelKornellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10862056292807754590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-79997750901551057512011-03-19T11:37:23.617-07:002011-03-19T11:37:23.617-07:00Beautiful, Steven! Very, very sad, but mesmerizin...Beautiful, Steven! Very, very sad, but mesmerizing and beautiful!<br /><br />You have such a talent for writing! I always get super excited when I see you've posted something new!!!Emmyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06290515700311919367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-39095834528421839742011-03-19T01:47:22.684-07:002011-03-19T01:47:22.684-07:00Sad, but very well-written.Sad, but very well-written.Jim Swindlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13632113399696237695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-82284296277438767552011-03-18T20:53:09.358-07:002011-03-18T20:53:09.358-07:00Oh... sigh.
Beautiful and all, but... sigh.Oh... sigh.<br />Beautiful and all, but... sigh.anniekatherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05559718343263958597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-73615740845416597692011-03-18T09:50:44.496-07:002011-03-18T09:50:44.496-07:00This is so beautifully written ... 'the giftin...This is so beautifully written ... 'the gifting women' ... I love that. Entrancing Magpie.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-64139457643933044422011-03-18T09:41:46.812-07:002011-03-18T09:41:46.812-07:00Depressing. Kind of reminds me of Kate Chopin'...Depressing. Kind of reminds me of Kate Chopin's "Story of an Hour." If I get married, I hope I won't be walking into an "early grave." Beautiful writing, though, Steven.<br /><br />I have one question about the fourth to last paragraph... "She watched him...driving up the lane to be fed..." She is talking about her husband, right? I'm not sure I understand the line. Why is he needing to be fed? Did you mean to use another word or...what?Chesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17705274089156450961noreply@blogger.com