tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post6886462016411756071..comments2023-08-19T01:55:15.053-07:00Comments on God’s Piñata: CalisthenicsSteven Cainhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00251773690801692907noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-33344975346502088032010-11-20T06:16:15.598-08:002010-11-20T06:16:15.598-08:00I don't know nuttin 'bout that writing stu...I don't know nuttin 'bout that writing stuff all I know is I got to wrapped in the story to proof read it.<br />It ended with goose bumps.Oldfoolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14688289425207257034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-32251530026019533332010-11-19T15:49:21.688-08:002010-11-19T15:49:21.688-08:00Oh! Double hugs for Emmy! Thanks!Oh! Double hugs for Emmy! Thanks!Steven Cainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00251773690801692907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-28268884785928315612010-11-19T15:48:35.791-08:002010-11-19T15:48:35.791-08:00There, how's that Emmy?
Good advice... consi...There, how's that Emmy? <br /><br />Good advice... considering it was in the book and I ignored it... defied it more like. Now I have two 'I's' and a 'my'... I fail. Oh well.Steven Cainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00251773690801692907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-54538676901963684482010-11-19T12:17:08.970-08:002010-11-19T12:17:08.970-08:00Very interesting piece of writing! I enjoyed read...Very interesting piece of writing! I enjoyed reading it :) My only qualm was that I thought perhaps you should introduce the first person narrator a little earlier in the piece, so that the reader can tell that this is not a 3rd person narration. But, other than that, I saw no fault with it! For such a difficult assignment, you tackled it very well!Emmyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06290515700311919367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-87091726247915574522010-11-19T11:52:25.996-08:002010-11-19T11:52:25.996-08:00Well, O. F. here's your double hug, to add to ...Well, O. F. here's your double hug, to add to your being 'creeped out'. Sorry about that... it's just where the story wanted to go. It really is a cool saw mill, promise.Steven Cainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00251773690801692907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8498536450964913359.post-72798621678555421982010-11-19T09:02:09.450-08:002010-11-19T09:02:09.450-08:00Well, you thoroughly creeped me out so I guess it&...Well, you thoroughly creeped me out so I guess it's good.Oldfoolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14688289425207257034noreply@blogger.com