If I am repaired, can we meet again for the first time, in all of the places I have feared to go, and then, again, in all of the places I will have forgotten, if I am repaired?



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Thursday, November 24, 2011

Magpie 92: 'Anoesis'



Magpie Tales 92
I dream above water,
yet,
somehow,
forget to breathe when our lips meet,
and come away each time,
gasping for air,
newly startled,
that you are not sustenance enough.

10 comments:

  1. What a beautiful offering. Isn't love just like that? Taking your breath away and surprising us. Well done.

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  2. Your poem ranks among my favorite this week ...

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  3. A delightful approach, and beautifully expressed.

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  4. Breathtaking, I agree, a kiss with the right person. :)

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  5. very nice.
    i like it.


    theres a song in which theres a line that goes: "know ill always love you but right now i just dont like you."

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  6. i dream above water mmmmm

    http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/08/29/the-kiss/

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  7. I agree with Tess, such an elegant write.

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  8. You have a way of looking at the world that is totally original.. always questioning just like you should.

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